Friday, February 25, 2011

Empowerment

(Prompt # 1, Page 555, Speech: Homemade Education, Written from the perspective of someone from the "hood" Malcolm X Grew up in during the 1960's)

Dear editor,
My name is Nathaniel, my friends call me Nate. I read your article about Malcolm. We used to be boys back in the day, he's on to bigger and better things now it seems. He was a real cool cat but now it seems he's even cooler. I mean, where I'm from, we don't have love for people like you, white people, I mean. No disrespect, it's just how we were taught. I got to say though, I listen to Malcolm now, he still comes around every now and again, and what he says strikes something in me, y'know. I really feel what he says sometimes. Then your article came out and I got a chance to understand what happened to him all those years back and it was really cool how he did all those things in jail. I mean, majority of us here been locked up at least once at some point in time and we just come out and make it harder for the cops to catch us next time, that's how we did and what we did because it was survival. Not Malcolm though, that boy came out and made something of himself. He talked and went up there sounding like a real preacher man. We looked up to Malcolm but didn't openly associate ourselves with him because we weren't on the same agenda. He was one of us through and through but he was aiming for the wrong thing in our eyes, so we let that brother go and did our own thing.
I thought many time about writing this to you, thinking that maybe you'd call the cops on a brother for no reason like the rest of yawl do, maybe you wouldn't even wanna read what I got to say. I wrote it though, because I was moved to, i felt something in me when I read Malcolm's story and it made me want more. I wanted more for me and my family. I didn't want to be a statistic y'know, because I don't want to be just another nobody. I want to be smart and good with the tongue so I could pick up a few extra girls haha. seriously though, I want more for myself, personally, because i seen too many people fall in this lifestyle. I see too many fall in the path of justice but the difference between their deaths and my homies death is that they die for something worth dying for. freedom. I ain't never thought freedome was reachable, i ain't never thought I would ever be able to know what freedom, I was used to running everytime a cop pulled up, not because I was doing something bad but just because it was fact that the cops were out for us. I'm tired of living that way though, i want what Malcolm got and what all these other freedom brothers got. I want that kinda faith and that kinda dream, to dream of a better future for everybody y'know. I actually want to be able to like and work with you people...I don't knwow what we gon' work on though haha. I'm taking a class for language trying to follow Malcolm's lead and educate myself. I think i'm doing pretty damn good for a negro, huh? 
I do thank you for publishing that peice about Malcolm. I walk around with a copy of it like i was actually carrying a piece. I thank you for showing me that all you ain't that bad. you put that out there because you knew what it would do...at least thats what i feel. i think you knew somebody like me would pick it up and get pushed into a movement bigger than himself. i thank you for giving me that oppurtunity brother, i mean that. You the first white person I ever called brother, and i mean that. I feel you in this with us and there are more like you and i hope the lord spare my life to meet them. Thanks again homie gotta get to class. Catch ya later cat.

nate

3 comments:

  1. Wow. You did an amazing job with this letter! I am very impressed and want to say thank you for going there and doing this piece so we as readers can see a different point of view. It is so interesting to think that Malcolm X came from a life like the person you are in this letter. This is a representation of what I'm sure so many black people felt back then when Malcolm started fighting for what he believed in. I read the essay on Malcolm X and his struggles and think that he was a brilliant man who gave voice to so many who were unable to speak up.
    I think he is also a great example of what education and language can do for a person. As Malcolm realized that he could not express himself effectively with the word knowledge he had, this person in your letter has realized the same and it is such an accurate portrayal of what many went through as they took in what Malcolm X meant to them.
    Language is a freedom agent and as Malcolm X stated "I never had been so truly free in my life."

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  2. "I want that kinda faith and that kinda dream..." If i could applaud you online I would, maybe I could just put-*triumphant applause for DAYS*. I HONESTLY loved this letter. I think I got goosebumps reading it. I wanted to cry in one instance, I know thats weird, but I think it was pretty great. The way you wrote did seem to pertain to the time frame, so you took care of that aspect of the question and you did give your feedback as it asked.
    I like how you keep thanking the editor and making him see your point of view on how things are and why they are this way. The style of this letter is good in the sense that you made others see how much of an influence Malcolm X was and how much credit one should give the editor for writing this article.
    You did a great job writing this letter and I appreciate that you chose to do this question. You made it even more valid when you said that Malcolm X took another route in life unlike you and some others in your neighborhood and you guys thought what he was striving for was wrong, only for you to end up striving for the same. It sounds like a contradiction when I say it, but it makes sense in your letter because of how you structured it=)

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  3. I’m really impressed with this letter. You really put your heart and emotions into this and I can truly relate to everything you said here. I also want “more for me and my family”, and I absolutely do not “want to be a statistic” or “another nobody”. Freedom is reachable, and it starts in your mind and with your attitude towards life and success, not merely survival. Unfortunately there is reality, and “running everytime a cop pulled up, not because I was doing something bad but just because it was fact that the cops were out for us” is something that many of us have to do in order to survive. My twelve year old son has had to deal with a similar type of situation already this year, and I’m so happy that that didn’t turn out like the situation in Compton with the 2009 shooting of sixteen year old Avery Cody.
    We never let Malcolm go, and Malcolm never gave up on us either. Malcolm X still stands as a martyred symbol of oppressed people worldwide and the struggle for “human rights”, not merely American civil rights. I want to point out that being “locked up at least once at some point in time and we just come out” does not “make it harder for the cops to catch us next time”; it actually makes it easier to locate and track us, and the sentence is much longer the next time around. Just my thoughts… good luck to you in all that you do.

    Mike

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